Tuesday, January 6, 2015

Fan Fiction 4 - The Dilemma of Tom

Hey there readers! This Fan Fiction story by "TY" is about Linda's father "selling" her to get out of financial trouble. Naturally, the theme may be hot to some readers and repugnant to others. Do leave your comments and thoughts below!

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Tom is sitting at his table trying very hard to balance the account. Times are bad now. Not easy to keep the business going with prices of everything going up.


Being a single parent with a daughter is not easy. Lucky she's all grown up and in University already. Due to her skin condition, he can at least save some money on the lingerie. Lingerie can be really expensive nowadays.

Mr Lim the supplier has told Tom that prices of goods are rising, he can't keep them at the old price anymore. If Tom doesn't pay up for last month's supply, he'll have to stop giving supply for this month. Even Ah Seng the 24 yr old driver has made his intention of quitting of he doesn't get his pay owed to him by end of the month.

Tom thought for a long time and couldn't think of a way to come up with the money...If only they would allow give another month of extension. The client is pretty happy doing business with Tom but the payment will have to be next month as per agreed.

Finally, Tom remembered what Lim hinted to him a few weeks back. Lim has seen LindaMichelle around the office. Always in heels, short skirt and baby T. Always without a bra. Never failed to give him a hard on every time. Lim wanted a chance to see LindaMichelle naked and maybe give her firm breasts a nice grope. Tom is thinking maybe he can arrange so that Lim can see LindaMichelle naked and he would agree to giving him an extension.

Finally he thought of a solution! he told the idea to Tom and Ah Seng. Both of them agreed they would give another month of extension if they get to see LindaMichelle naked right in front of their own eye. Tom agreed but gave them only 1 condition. Can do anything that LindaMichelle allows except fuck her.

Tom told LindaMichelle that Lim and Ah Seng would be coming to the house to watch a football game that night. To make it not so suspicious, Tom invited Mr Teo too; a close neighbor and an old friend.

Linda came back as usual from her class. The guys were already in the living room, but no one was paying attention to the game. All eyes were fixed on her when she came home. Wearing a tight pink shirt and short flare skirt with red heels, she went and greeted her dad with kiss. Then she greeted all of them. Tom asked Linda to get each of them a beer from the fridge.

Linda happily agreed and went to the kitchen. Opened the fridge door a blast of cold air came out. Making her nipples more erect than usual. The beers are at the bottom shelves and she bend down to grab them. Not knowing to her, her skirt lifted up at the back and all the guys had an eyeful of her bare clean pussy. Ah Seng being the youngest had an instant hard on.

Linda came out and gave everyone a can of beer. Excused herself to clean up. Being her usual self, she went into her room without closing the door and started taking off her clothes. Off came her top and her skirt. She's still wearing her heels when she posed for the mirror to check herself out before grabbing the towel and disappearing to shower.

All 3 men couldn't believe their eyes and kept staring at the toilet door for a whole minute. After a while, Linda was all clean and came out of the bathroom to dry herself. Tom thought this is a good time to keep to his part of the promise, "See Linda naked in front of their own eyes". He called out to Linda to get some tit bits for them to watch the game.


Linda quickly dried her hair and came out of the room naked, without a strand of thread on her perfect young lady body. She came out to serve the guys some chips Tom had bought earlier on. Standing at barely 1 feet in front of Lim, he just swallowed hard his saliva. Unable to believe this beautiful lady is standing naked in front of him serving him chips! Ah Seng couldn't take it anymore and boldly reach out his hands and grab Linda's full breasts. Then gave her erect nipples a twitch.
Linda's body automatic reaction was to moan in excitement. Hearing her sexy moan, Teo also couldn't help but reach out to grab her nice round ass. Linda at this moment was quite excited and her 1st reaction was to grab Ah Seng's hard cock. Mr Lim joined in the fun after watching Linda was such a whore. Ah Seng dropped his pants and Linda was sucking on it like a pro. The sound of wet blow job was drowning out the sound from the TV.

Soon all 3 men had their cock out and Linda was kneeling down in front of them. Expertly giving everyone a turn of blow job while each of her hands were giving the other 2 a hand job. Ah Seng couldn't take Linda's powerful sucking and told her he's cumming. He blow a big load on her nice pair of breasts. His thick and warm cum on her body made her even more horny and she gave Mr Teo the best blow job he ever had. He too couldn't last long from that experience and blew his load right on Linda's face. Linda just loved the smell of hot cum on her face.

Lim, being an ass lover, told Linda to bend over the sofa while he enjoyed her nice round ass. Giving her a spank or two while he masturbated. Soon Lim felt a pressure build up at the base of his cock and stroke faster. He too blew his load all over Linda's bum. Ah Seng being the 1st to cum was resting while watching the other 2 came all over Linda. By the time Lim had cum, Ah Seng was all hard again. He asked Linda to give him another blow job. Linda being and obedient girl suck on his cock without asking any question.

Ah Seng pinched on Linda's erect nipples and this made her harder to concentrate on the task at hand! She was half moaning and half sucking. Mr Lim saw Linda's love juice has been flowing down to her knees while she's blowing Ah Seng decided to pleasure back Linda. He inserted 2 fingers into Linda's pussy. It's all wet and slippery and had no problem going in. Linda yelped in pleasure. Ah Seng was getting frustrated that Linda keep forgetting to blow him decided to pinch her nipples harder to remind her. Linda was jolted back from all her pleasures and started to lick Ah Seng's balls sending him to high heaven.

Soon, Linda was half begging for Mr Lim to finger fuck her harder as she's cumming and half giving Ah Seng a blow job. Suddenly Linda arched her back as she orgasmed. Unable to control her pleasure, Linda got light headed and black out. Ah Seng had to finish up the job himself. He bend down to Linda,s limp body and opened her mouth. He shot his 2nd load of cum into her mouth.
While Linda was lying on the floor with cum all over her body, all 3 men went to wipe themselves up. They thanked Tom. Lim told Tom that he would be writing off any debts that Tom owed him so far and Ah Seng agreed too that he would not bother about the 2 months salary owed to him. Tom felt relieved hearing that. He cleaned Linda up and brought her back to her room to rest on the bed.

71 comments:

  1. Linda, I've decided that for my new year's resolution I'm going to try to follow the same rules that you do. =)

    Only, I'm not sure I know all of them. I had to look through the stories to make sure, and I've found:
    1 - only 2 articles of clothing
    2 - only 2 buttons on any article of clothing
    3 - knees must never touch
    4 - don't let anyone look up your skirt

    Is that all of them or are there more..?

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  2. I am sorry, TY, but This is bad writing. Half-cooked, rushed, and lacking in both imagination and creativity.

    This is like cheap hardcore pornography, unlike Linda's crafty take on storytelling and narrative structure that made me follow this blog in the first place.

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  3. Nice write up... But something feels missing from normal... Hmm think could be missing Linda's personal thoughts...:) but nice story overall ;)
    -lonex

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  4. Good effort, but it is missing Linda's style of innocent exhibitionsim...

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  5. Oooh not having sex is such a tease. This story was really hot! Hope to hear more like this! I would also try writing some fan fiction for you too! :D

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  6. Yay! Finally some new stories.

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  7. can imagine the cum flowing out from your mouth...

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  8. Oh what a great story!
    It is my 8th reply and can I got invited to your XXX blog,Linda?

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  9. This is an interesting story by a fan, but I don't think I'm a fan, I prefer te stories of Linda falling into scenarios,
    Not having them set up by her father. So yeah,
    Not a fan

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  10. Teasing story this is. Why tom no invite me =(

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  11. Nice story but kind of lacking something.

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  12. Not as exciting as the latest one!

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  13. I am a constant reader in Literotica.com for many years. Your concept and stories is the best so far. I am glad that you start writing again.

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  14. nice writing.... and sexciting

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  15. good effort. hope to see more.

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    1. happy and prosperous chinese new year!

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  16. finally had the time to read this.

    feels a bit off having her dad set her up considering that he seems to believe in the eroticization of linda as normal.

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  17. I always love how Linda is portrayed as so innocently unaware of everyone's sexual desires toward her

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  18. Finally new stories!!! Been away for a while and kind of miss your blog stories. Fans version of LindaMichelle will not be the same as the original ones. But good job TY and keep them CUMMING!!

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  19. Awesome stories ! Keep up the stories as I catch up with your stockpile ! =P

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  20. Awesome stories ! Keep'em cumming while I catch up on the back issues =P

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  21. i liked this story... very sexciting indeed.

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  22. nice story!
    (bryanongyk@gmail.com)

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  23. Shit. I can only imagine myself in their shoe getting ablowjob from u. Nice stories though cheers

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  24. the men must really have good self control not to fuck Linda!
    WOW!!!
    I've emailed you a separate story continuation for his if you wanna :)

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  25. sounds like a dream come true when she appears naked in the living room

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  26. Another fantastic story by Linda!

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  27. such a hot story...i got so hard when she was serving chips naked!!!

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  28. hot story.. make me instant hardon.. wonder if there is a second part.

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  29. Too predictable from the start.

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  30. Nice story, can fans contribute their ideas to you too?

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  31. if only all disputes can be solved so beautifully

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  32. How i wish to get a blowjob from u...lol! nice story btw.

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  33. I would love to feed you regularly.... If you know what I mean.

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  34. would love it if she appeared in my living room naked!

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  35. Linda, I dream you...

    very nice story.

    Do you think about write a fantasy magazine :)

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  36. I was a silent reader and wants to keep myself updated with your new blog. Hope you will understand my feeling. I have enjoyed all your stories. And someday dream of being part of it. Hope I had loaned some money to your father and I would have joined the cream pie here :)

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  37. decent tale, but lacking of the usual "lindamichelle" substance

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  38. Love how you tease in your stories

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  39. Linda quickly dried her hair and came out of the room naked, without a strand of thread on her perfect young lady body.

    just wish my wife take off all her clothes off at home.

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  40. Just wish my girlf will be like you D:

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  41. babe seriously love these stories man. keep it up! xoxo

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  42. Really nice stories that inspires me and my gf to try it out. Thank you! Cheers!

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  43. Wonder whr you find the time to write such stories=/ Kudos to you!

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  44. the thoughts of exploiting girls sexual is giving me a hard on. keep the stories coming!

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  45. seriously, why not just give it all and give her one good F***? I'm sure Linda will keep cumming too

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  46. can I just submit a fantasy story to publish on your blog? it be cool.

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  47. another story on exploitation and "sense of helplessness"...turn on!
    Im gluing to this blog for story updates!!!

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  48. Feeling horny now due to this!!!

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  49. I thought it would've been abit more exciting if there was a form of an internal struggle on Tom's side. A little more intricate details on the way from the bathroom to the boys will make this one hell of a story. But still extremely enjoyable!

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  50. short story! but making me horny as hell!!!

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  51. Interesting story by a fan...has potential to develop further though

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  52. So her dad basically pimped her eh? Hahaha

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  53. tot is pretty good for the first time...keep up the good work !!

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  54. Linda was not as innocent as some other stories, but still loved it. pj

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  55. This story deviates from your usually style

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